Dr. Tick Tock

If you're wondering why no one has posted to this, it's because it's absolutely stunning. Haikus, in my opinion, are hard to work with because they're too short for me ...

Interesting. That's my word for this particular piece. Unique, at least to the poetry I have read in my life. First thing that nagged me- because their there.. Their should ...

Hello Ayumi! To begin with, I must say I really like the title. I don't know Spanish, past "Hola" and "Si", but foreign language always catches my attention, and that's ...

Wow. Jan and In The Moonlight have covered pretty much all the specific stuff I was going to say. Yay! (It's almost one a.m. and I'm glad for that weight ...

Hello Taytay! First off, just want to say that I think the general idea of this is pretty cool and unique. I have always been a big fan of faeries, ...

I really like it! One critique for you: The cars rush by The other children fly To each open car door. Maybe say "To each open their car door."? "Open ...

To be a writer you have to take criticism patiently and politely, Bookmarker. Critiquing isn't always going to be compliments. And mikedb1492 is a reader, giving you tips and opinions ...

Good concept; I like it. However you seem to have some controversial issues with grammar. You have good punctuation and capitalization and then just the opposite... sometimes in the same ...

As ridersofdamar pointed out, this does seem to clash a bit. I was expecting a sort of gothic, historical theme, and then you start mentioning popcorn and pokemon cards. It's ...

Very lovely! I love the simile; very unique! Some critiquing for ^__~ The human heart is like a bone, framing who you are inside. But a heart, unlike a bone, ...